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Hanging All the Signs by ~Soo-Me:iconSoo-Me:



Yes…im bored…I'm not answering my phone
It's…this time…when I simply like no one
Clear…my space…I need some time alone
&don't…pass by…coz I feel like killing someone!

Everything is making me mad
Im sorry for screaming real loud
I warned you, won't you understand!

"Back-off"…"DANGER"…"sleeping monster" im hanging all the signs
Chocolate…movies…strawberry smoothies, my prescription tonight

Feet…on the bed…head is on the ground
My…mood is…flipping up-side-down
Piles…of papers…are scattered all around
Can't…seem to…gather my thoughts in lines!

Everything is making me mad
Im sorry for screaming real loud
I warned you, won't you understand!

"Back-off"…"DANGER"…"sleeping monster" im hanging all the signs
Chocolate…movies…strawberry smoothies, my prescription tonight

It won't be…long before…my symptoms…all wear-off
& you will…be back on…the white list…so hold on
I will be fine…I will be fine
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Author's Comments

i bet everyone of us pass through such a phase><"...


thX for :iconlosing-wieght: & :iconarch-satan: coz reading their amazing stuff made me want to wriiite moooore:D

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Whoa!! Very cleverly written!! I'm in awe, as always!! :heart: Love it!
:iconsoo-me:
:heart: :heart: thaaaankS!
ur comments make me HAPPY :D
:hug:

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break...live in distance, let paranoia take control!
:iconpunkie-o:
omg, i'm singing it now XD
lool
I luv it <3
masha'allah u have one talented family
well written..
<3
luv ur choice of words and how it rhymes
lol i don't know what to say ne more
I'm going to take a class in criticism next year insha'allah...and then I'll no whats the appropriate words and things to say..
for the time being..
all i can say is..
u guys inspire me <3
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a VERY biiiiiiiiiiiiiig :kiss: for ur support N_N

allah ystoor sho 7ykon r2yek bsh3'lna after u take the 'criticism' class;p

thX alot Punkie-O :heart:

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break...live in distance, let paranoia take control!
:iconpuresadisim:
so intense :heart:
I love it so much..
I missed ur writing..and this one turned out great:D

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Scars, scars all over me..so many beautiful mistakes~
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coool^---^ happy u think so! was afraid it wasn't as good as the rest><
:kiss:

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break...live in distance, let paranoia take control!
:iconpuresadisim:
it's beautifully written..
it done its purpose..it convayed emotion..and I truly feel each word you wrote in there..

xx

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Scars, scars all over me..so many beautiful mistakes~
:iconsoo-me:
awwwww:heart: thX sweetneSs! u made me :blushes:
:kiss:

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break...live in distance, let paranoia take control!
:iconsoo-me:
hehe><# yeah..thX for asking

it's just that iv started writing this two weeks ago when i was feeling that EXACT way;) but haven't completed it,
& i had to finish it today>>though im in a better mood now;)^^

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break...live in distance, let paranoia take control!

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