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It's like you jumped out from my fictionist thoughts
& pass me by when I quickly got caught
     By your eyes
I'm fallin' in love I realized

You hit me like a big school yellow bus
I never thought that I could go so nuts
     From just a smile
I want you to walk me down the aisle

<Chorus:>
Coz you play guitar
& drive the coolest car
You listen to Rock bands
You even adore cats
You're either taken or gay
Coz there is no f**kin' way
You could be sOo damn perfect baby!

Afraid you'd hear my heart beating sOo loud
Coz I'm not surrendering before I find out
     You're not a dream
& this is not a dirty scheme

<Chorus:>
Coz you never cheated or lied
Believe smoking is not right
You prefer 'Seinfeld' to 'friends'
& deadly you hate kids!
You must be taken or gay
Coz there is no f**kin' way
You could be sOo damn perfect baby!


Yes I'll find, find, find, find the drawback
There must be some, some, some, something you lack
     But if you're real
Only then we'll have a deal ;)

You could be sOo damn perfect baby!
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"fictionist thoughts;)"

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i'll think about it ;)

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Scribbled notes.. forbidden thoughts
Digging real deep.. insomniac sleep
Last hope fades.. stuck in a maze
~the story of my life~
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so beautiful so great..:heart:

I want more lyrics!!

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Scars, scars all over me..so many beautiful mistakes~
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hehehe...
more lyrics means more action, coz they are all inspired from our lives;)...
i might write somthing about you one day:p
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thXxxxx glad u do!
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ok.. now dont think i am being bitchy ..cuz its a nice song!!..walla

bas..
"Coz you never cheated or lied
Believe smoking is not right"

there is too much space between smoking and right..
unless u already made the music :D

because "is" and "not" make alot of gaps between the lyrcis..

try using "aint" or "smoking's not right"

other than that..


its nice ^^ vewy vewy nice ^^

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catch yall later
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<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
So0o0 inlove with purely innocent words and the RL experience ;]
and again i'll think about it
A-m H-allucinating now after reading the lyrics hihi ;)
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thX 4 commiting & don't worry i'm opened 4 suggestions, i'll admit it that i had a problem fitting all my ideas in the second chorus><" but at the end when i sang it ,it turned out to be just fine & in tone!
actually when singing it, it kind of sound like "somking's not right"...
thX again& glad u liked^^
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heheheheheh><#
dnt remind me. . . .

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